Writing 101: A room with a view

As I sit here in front of my laptop I find it hard to think of a place that I want to be at this moment.  If I’m given a choice, I crave nothing more than to dwell in my own dream, to be in a small and cosy room with a beautiful hand made water fountain.  Sitting in a worn out arm chair and listen to sound of my kids playing in our back yard.  My eldest son become a private who conquered an island with his little brother and sister as his faithful sidekick.  The dream seems so far away from where I am right now.  But sooner or later, I will make sure I make my own water fountain.  Even though I am a lousy artist.

P/s:  A cup of coffee made by my man would be great as we share our stories about the stressful workday.  Love in a cup of coffee.

5 thoughts on “Writing 101: A room with a view

  1. Your grammar is pretty good. I really enjoyed reading this short description of your dream. I didn’t think about the assignment like that, and your wanting to be a dream is very creative.

  2. “If I am given a choice, I crave nothing more than to “dwell” in my own dream, (you were using past tense and it is present tense). love the post!

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